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Awwww menno. I was going to do you a nice review on this saying how good I found it, and then I saw that the profis had all written things ...

Okaaaay. I aggree with everything it says up there. But since I'm no great writer, I can`t give you a review I'm really sure of. My advice is: get yourself ...

Mwahahahahahahah god I've got a stomach ache! Yeah, I luved twilight for a while, but so did I harry Potter^^. Anyhoo I'm over it. But I still find J.K Rowlings ...

Hey Rosey, your story is great! I was just browsing through yws searching for something proper to review. Looks like I found it!^^ There are still a few things that ...

Okay, I kinda liked it, but there are some problems... I find you should dense up the lines. Even if you wrote to induce a feeling of airiness, I kinda ...

Yes, I really like it, but I find some things quite confusing as well: “Do you know what time it is?” “It’s nearly seven o’ clock sir.” here, if I ...

I was stuck on a motorbike and traveling at a human pace! you probably mean travelling I retorted. I can more then handle myself this is than Why couldn’t the ...

I still really like it, but perhaps you could work over it a bit more. I stood outside the rotten, iron gate looking into the old, abandoned manor. It had ...

I found it really great! Although it does remind me a bit of twilight, but so, I loved twilight ^^. I hope this gets somewhere, because I'm going to stay ...

oooh... I loved it, especially the parts with the canvas similies ( I paint ^^) . It really gave me the feeling of happy love. At the end it slowed ...

I like your poem very much, and agree with my predecessor on all accounts. I don't know if you have really been in this situation or if you just wrote ...