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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Nursery

    Hey! Wow, this prologue drew me straight away. I don't know whether you are using the consistent repetition of 'I lay my babies...' for effect, but if not, try writing ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Chrono (Part 1)

    Hey! This is a short chapter isn't it? I'd suggest if you haven't posted a prologue already, that this became your prologue. Or alternatively, that you extend on the first ...

    May 31, 2011


The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein