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Thank you :)

Thank you, awesome advice by you guys.

Thank you, awesome advice by you guys.

Hey, First of, thank you so much for such amazing words of appreciation, means a lot. I am currently reviewing it and changing the structure because this feels long, maybe ...

And thanks about the advice on spacing, I did not know that about this site.

Hey, Thanks a lot firstly, I like it that you understand the emotions I tried to portray. A few weeks ago I was in a pretty bad state, I was ...

Hey, Thanks a lot firstly, I like it that you understand the emotions I tried to portray. A few weeks ago I was in a pretty bad state, I was ...

Hey, Thank you so much, I will be shortening it a little and breaking into stanzas. Nothing really went wrong I just did not pay much attention to formatting. I ...

Thank you so much, really needed your good advice, I am going to break it into stanzas and shorten it a little. I will let you know when I'm done ...

I wanted short lines all the way however it was difficult to keep them compact while writing about so many things. I am new to poetry though and this is ...

You are right, I wanted to write so much more but being precise was the goal here. And "he" is a lover who has lost everything but memories, while he ...

I've always wanted to un-know people, that would be awesome but still maybe the painful memories that remain are a gift of existence.

This is wonderful work :)