shaniac

Thanks for your review! Every question and more will be answered in the incoming chapters (including who killed Benjamin and why ).

Thank you so much for your review!

Thank you so much for your review!

Thank you for your review! You pointed out some things that I definitely need to consider when I'm rewriting this chapter, so thank you again!

Thanks again for the review! And yeah, Natalie is related to Benjamin Marcos but I was kind of thinking that she doesn't know that, I guess. She thinks that it ...

Thanks again for reviewing! Yeah, I guess when I was writing this chapter, I figured people would read the prologue first and then chapter 1, but like you mentioned, readers ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'll keep those in mind when I get around to rewriting this chapter.

Thank you for your review! I'm still trying to figure what tense I'm playing around in with this entire novel (present tense does sound like a documentary, now that you ...

Thank you so much for your review!

Thank you for the reply! It actually did clear up a bunch of stuff I had questioned as I was reading but I couldn't put it into words. And with ...

Thank you very much for the review! Why Fredrick plays a connection will be explained in later chapters as well as why he disappeared that night and why the police ...

Thank you so much for your review! Harsh reviews, in my opinion, are actually really helpful. I will work on those things you pointed out (I'm kind of a new ...

Thank you for your review! This bit is happening in 1997 and then the next chapter will be flashing forward to 2024. I thiiink I'm going to a bit where ...

Thank you for pointing out those tense switches and the review! I'm still trying to figure out what tense I'm writing this entire thing in, haha.

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Hello, shaniac here to review your poem! The title caught my attention as what I thought this poem was going to about the different fears attacking the narrator or something. ...