shadowed_mist

The Prologue isn't really supposed to make any sense, and i didn't spend too much time on it because it was just a way to introduce the main character: the ...

Thanks for everyone's support on this story. I have finished it, I just haven't posted the story because I'm starting to get serious about getting it published. I'm not allowed ...

The reason the boy could see Ashy is never explained. Its just an oddity in the physical world. I think I might explain it someday.... I know its cliche, but ...

Thank you. I'll try and edit that out.... Gotta remember to do that.... (another thing to add to the to-do list)

I've fixed the story on my laptop more ever since then, so most of those problems are fixed. As for lack of discription, I mention them all later. She is ...

Arilia is a strange charecter. When she doesn't want something to happen, she falls a sleep, which is why she was hoping for unconciousness instead of wanting to avoid it. ...

Okay, Arilia falls asleep a lot because she's tired. The beginning of the story is meant to be confusing because she's confused. She can ride side-saddle on a lion because ...

Are you sure this is your first attempt writing a story? My first attempt was two sentences per chapter. Very nice! I've seen people who've written for most of their ...