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This is a longer piece and I only have a minute to critique ( my apologies! ) “The regularity in which crime is committed, especially murder, is sad really,” my ...

This was the best. Even though I don't know you. I love you for making it. You should actually make it a little movie and put it on youtube or ...

I will start by saying, you have very little to critique, this piece is near flawless, and very captivating. “Sorry. I’m part cat, so I usually the urge to cough ...

Looks like every one has touched on most everything, so I will just give my opinion here and there. When I got to school the next day I was ready ...

I have a lot of poetry like this. Words written carelessly because that was how I felt. They mean a lot even when they are simple. I especially like the ...

As I am less the perfect when it comes to my own grammatical critiquing, I will probably will just be critiquing on the flow of your piece. Why did he ...

Every bone in my body ached, bones I didn’t know I had were screaming at me to stop running, for the love of Stikle, stop running. The only things keeping ...

There were so many critiques( you must be loved Haruno!) that I apologize for any repeat critiques. I am not fabulous when it comes to catching grammatical errors, but I'll ...

I don't have enough time to do the entire thing ( which I liked, btw :) ) But I will make it a point to touch on as much as ...

You have a gift for description to be admired, but I fear you use the name Dan far to often. I know it is easy to feel you are using ...