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Miniauthor, I didn't actually realize how many times I used the word smell, and you're right, I can simply reduce it thus: "From the kitchen behind the bar came some ...

Roon. It's American spelling - travelling vs traveling, harbour vs harbor, colour vs color. But that's okay, I don't expect you to realize that (realize vs realise). As orc is ...

Hi again! Firstly - I scanned the story, and to my absolute astonishment, it's absolutely improved 100% from the first post. Well done, FireFox! Second, I see Master Yoda gave ...

If you don't want people to see this story, simply " hide" it to other viewers.

Epic ending.

Hey, I didn't like the flash back. To be honest, I just skimmed through it, not really reading it. I wanted to read more about the wolf in the woods, ...

It's a bunny!

"In fact, I'm pretty sure I would be spreading more of the same rumours, just for spite. At my school, no one bothers to make rumours about people that aren't ...

Aedomir - thanks for that :) *overwhelmed* Thank you Jabber!!! Wow - you went to INSANE lengths! Thank you thank you thank you *kisses ground at your feet* *sigh* I ...

Hirsch. . . do you mean Hearse? As in the wagon/car that carts around the coffins? Otherwise, I liked this - jai -

*laughs* It's great to see people actually taking into consideration all my suggestions! *scratches head* Yeah - in Australia we call periods fullstops - my bad. Okay - here's my ...

*laughs* Excellent! Reminds me of: Oh my dear, you take my breath away - What have you stepped in to smell this way? lolz - good job! - jai -

I love the books - and people do seem to be reading them - I mean, why would there be a movie based upon the first book if people didn't?