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To be honest, I skipped the beginning part - well, I skimmed it. The actual story story was interesting. The sex part was, "What the f*ck did she do this ...

I like this, Jaz. I really do. I have no idea why you've only got one review on this piece. If everything you wrote was as well written as this. ...

I liked this. A bit repetitive with the word "fuck(ed)", but I can understand how it is used to some dramatic effect. The whole thing is a bit cliched - ...

Me again to check out your work. 1) I like this better than the other half of the Prologue 2) This half is written better, and it sounds like you ...

Hey :) Nice little story you got here. I found a few holes/errors/things I didn't like, and so here they are. Have fun :) --------------------------- Prologue part one: The Day ...

Nice! This was really awesome! It was nice and simple, and it struck a chord in me somewhere =D *claps* ... *shakes head* This WAS really cool - so much ...

Herro there! :) I'm baaaaaack! Okay - to your story! ---------------------------------- The city Tristan called home was built on the edge of the frozen sea. Most of the surface buildings ...

*shakes head* You will grow addicted to slow claps, my friend :) *claps* Another excellent peice of work! If you're churning out chapters this fast, and this good, I won't ...

*slow clap* ........ *shakes head* ........ *more clapping* This is terrific writing. Absolutely excellent. The story drew me in straight away. The stories from all sides is also riveting. See ...

I loved this! Outstanding work! If I had picked this up in a bookstore, I would have bought it no matter the price! I love the main character, and the ...

*head/desk* I only got it AFTER DoctorClicky said something about a medical condition ^^" Very good twist (after I reread the ending after a while to see what I missed ...

Hey - you seem to have plenty of GOOD critiques already, you don't need mine ^^ I agree with every single comment the above YWSers have stated. Set it out ...

Hey - thanks for the PM - I truly haven't been on in a while :) Ok - let's get started ^^ -------------------------------------------- Tristan was aware of blood seeping through ...

Um, hello. I think the reason why you don't have anyone looking at your work is because you flooded the forum with it. If you can somehow persuade a Moderator ...

Just to let you know, I did read it. . . But I think this type of thing would be better off in a Blog, and also, the two "cats" ...