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Hey :) Comments in red, repetition in green. * My home is a playground for the unstable [Awesome opening] . My father paces back and forth, as he waits for ...

Hey :) You have two really good reviews so far, but I'll add my own thoughts too. Comments in red, repetition, if there is any, in green. The Fate of ...

Hey, first off, I suggest removing that random post you have straight after your story: thanks for reading people of the YWS this is just sort of a pilot you ...

Hey Brass :) You critiqued Battle for me, so I thought I would return the favour :] As it so happens, I don't generally read fanfiction, but due to a ...

Hey Golden, Jai here :) Um, your post is really long, and that's probably the main reason why it's scaring away reviews, which is quite sad, really. In the case ...

Okay lavender, I don't mean to be rude, it's just that any person can see that this story is defiantly "definitely" NOT fan fiction! 1) don't you read any Greek ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society, Alikat. I believe that the rules indicate that you should adequately review three pieces before you submit your own for review. But I'll give you ...

Howdy :) I liked this story, as I felt a connection with the main characters - while I didn't have an openly abusive step-father, I still know what it's like ...

Hey :) I normally review while I read, so I hope everything makes sense in the end. In your case however, because the piece was a bit longer than I ...

Incredible. I'm a tad disappointed to find that this story is over so soon. I realize that you can't really write more for it; it'd be a bleak story to ...

Perhaps no one is reviewing you, Rock, because you yourself have 0 reviews to your name. Welcome to Young Writers Society. I believe that the rules indicate that you should ...

Hi WolfPaws. First of all, I think your display picture is exactly the same as SylverDawn's, which is a bit eerie. Secondly, it's 3:22am here in Australia at the moment, ...

Herro, comments in red, repetition in green (if there are any): A cat. There it sat. Or rather should I say, there it lay. (Is it bad to admit that ...

zomg, Rohan :3 I must critique your work now :P Comments in red, repetition in green. There was something beautiful about the night. Though it was no stronger than a ...

Just wow. What a cool idea. Mind. Blown. :P I like your style of writing and because it is from Bailey's point of view, it's okay to be a bit ...