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Hey Shear :) Was going to review these all the other day, but Persephoneia beat me to it on exactly the same day, and I had noticed that we had ...

Hey Kitty :3 Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers. The glasses slid away from his face as if repulsed by the dark, curled moustache congealed with alcohol. lol. While ...

Hey :) Jai here, 1/4th of the Four Musketeers who will eventually review your work ;) My mom left three years ago. That’s when it started, my father’s death. I ...

Hey Chetan, Jai here, one of the Four Musketeers. First, just quickly, "pleas" is the plural of "plea", as in, "My plea is that you keep me alive.". Continuing this ...

I wrote this in a fit of spastic inspiration and don't be surprised if it makes the list for worst written stories in the universe. Worst written story in the ...

Back again! Sorry I took so long. I just honestly forgot that you were updating on this thread (like I suggested), and I feel awful for forgetting :( Just nudge ...

Heyo Pink, Jai here on behalf of 1/4th of the Four Musketeers :3 Ivory held the end of the candle stick holder, gripping it with all her strength as she ...

Hey Pink :) Here to review as requested from the Four Musketeers WRFF thread. His tongue swept over his small fangs as walked back and forth, Pacing with hands behind ...

Hi Nutty, I'm Jai :3 The opening paragraph was amazing. Just saying :P It was completely attention-grabbing and it made me absolutely eager to read more. Sam and his captain ...

Hiya Silent, I'm Jai :D Just wow, this story was really good. It was chilling. I was thinking the whole time, Murder him! Smother him with a pillow! I couldn't ...

Hey Elinor :) Jai here to review. If you're going to stick literally to the email concept, perhaps you should also include a time stamp, and the email addresses of ...

Hey Lyn, I'm Jai :3 Time. The only thing he needed was time. This really reminded me of the movie Dear John, when Savanah wrote to John about how her ...

Hey Pigeon, Jai here to review. He dressed quickly, filled his pocket with pencils and grabbed his sketch book, then made his way down to the street and wandered towards ...

Howdy Croc :) Jai here, after procrastinating. I read this about five hours ago and was going to review it, but got caught up with playing DotA amongst other things. ...

Hey, I'm Jai :) Little kids, heavily kitted with winter gear. One smiled at him. He returned the gift. Hmm, all your sentences are really short and really descriptive. The ...