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Re: Splitting my reflection
Any critiques are much appreciated :), and will try to be returned.
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: That Lucifer Girl
I took into account what you guys said (thanks for the advice by the way) and I got rid of the cliches and tried to make the poem run a ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: The darkness of living
Thanks for the comments, I think I'm gonna take the 'white as black' out- it IS ambiguous. Also, I'm unsure of whether to develop it and make it into a ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Unrequited.
Cheers everyone for the comments, nice to see that you all liked it - although any critiques are welcome! :P
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: A Fresh Start.
I liked the concept, but the last lines seemed to mess up the rhythm with being too long. I like how you never reveal the person, but it's blatantly obvious ...
May 30, 2008