scribblingquill

thank you =3 just a question though, what do you think orange fairies are? I wonder if anyone gets it right... and yes I'm the narrator, this is sort of...autobiographical? ...

haha nice end, i like it (y)

:L I like it a lot, but i don't think it really suits the form of a poem.

this is really cool the image is great. I know we're not meant to know whats on the paper, and thats part of the mystery and all that, but I ...

Ahahaha. Lol. This sounds like something I would do.

I love "You died like people breathe". that was fantastic. Just to point out what everyone else probably already has. Its Lay doewn on the grass, not Lied down on ...

wowthis s a really cool piece. Kinda sad, but one of the most original things I've rea in ages. if i was less lazy I'd crit more, but well done! ...

LOVE them. I remember reading about a boy, then turning telve and being all "I'm the same age as marcus now!" I think he's a great writer, the way he ...

ahh i remember reading this. I guess I did like it, but I was disappointed after the masterpiece that is Artemis Fowl.

Okay in answer to everyone's comments...: thanks! Im glad you liked it! And yes, I'll go back and fix the capitals ^_^ -Barker- yes he is a snake with wings ...

I always wondered what their first meeting was like... I love it. its great to have Alice's perspective. And you totally captured the writing style. Again. loved it. ^_^

I love these books. Although all I want to see is more of Alyss and Dodge...cause I'm that much of a girl. You managed to replicate the style pretty well. ...

haha thanks. I know its really short. It was really just an idea for a situation to write about than an actual finished piece. I might go back and expand ...

Thank you! I will go through and change a couple of details when I get round to it ^_^ And actually I went for the supporing band, cause they are ...

Haha thank you! I agree about all the and stuff. This was writted a long time ago, and I kinda tune out after having read something a million times. Thanks ...