scribblingquill

This is a really lovely poem Imagery is great, and the theme is very interesting this is the kind you can curl up in

wow you're 13? potential potential potential I think this has capacity to be something really interesting, but if you don't like it, don't write it. Working on things you don't ...

hahaha ha ha omg haha ...wow this comment makes me sound so intelligent. still. this is awesome.

i think "stuck up fags" is a bit harsh to be honest. theres no need for people to start name calling.

wow awesomeness the voice is so clear, its brilliant

:D thank you for all the points! I typed this really quick, but i didn't notice there were QUITE so many typos and mistakes. yeah it comes out a lot ...

you should try and base things on real feelings. your poem will never be as good as someones who truly feels like this about a person, so try and write ...

i get what you mean. but thats not a poem.

and...where is it?

"dark is soft" ...i love that.

i really like some of the lines of this, but i think its more suited to prose than poetry because of all the dialogue. the general feel of it is ...

im guessing you're religious?

that is the point of a diary after all ^^ Its seems i am fulfilling its requirements. that one's all very angsty. i think i might do the ones of ...

thank you! I think I shall perhaps, just the stuff i think is best writing-wise. My diary does contain an awful lot of shit. i'll link when its done :D

thank you! I was worried people would probably just find it boring, obviously its all much more interesting to me because i was there ^^ Yeah I know there are ...