screamandshout

i absullutly love this poem its so emotional

i loves it

i agree

i love it and the person above me is wrong, its called free verse

i really like it because of the emotion but at first i couldnt really tell if it was a guy or a girl and the way its really straight forward ...

you should really write more and i agree with the other guy the tourest part was to cleche

yes this will be continuing

i liked it the end just leaves you begging for more