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such a cliff hanger ending! OMG, I don't want to have to wait for the next part. the pace seemed a little rushed, but the content was amazing. I really ...

Fabulouse as per your usual. I am really liking her mom, she's so mom-ish. I eagerly await the next part. -Gen

"Why did I forgive you? She’s coming back, I know it. Someday she’ll be back, and she’s going to want you. That I can promise. Maybe you’ve learned, who knows? ...

Thanks for the critic JCobsesed :D I'll look into making the sister more realistic, she does need some good qualities... About the painting, to tell you the truth I don't ...

First off... Thank you so much for the critics!!!! I really appreciate it Sam! ( of course you may call me anything you like :wink: ) ok, so to clear ...

The movie was awful, I saw it and felt sick it was so bad! (not that I feel strongly about it or anything *sarcasm*lol) They completely butchered the plot, the ...

Hmmm... I'm starting to see it now. guess I misunderstood, anyways I still really like the poem, way better than I myself could ever do... poetry is not my forte ...