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Wow, I can say for certain that I have really have experienced the same feeling you've got here. This poem takes me back to a very vivid memory I have ...

Eheh... I didn't really fall over in mirth at this one. Of course, I'm not really a joke-person... Did you make that one up?

Thanks you guys for the feedback. Ducati, character development is a given for the rest of the story. This is just the prologue, after all. The "get your attention with ...

I like it very much, actually. It's a lot like a hybrid between something by Smash Mouth and SR-71. It's very punk rock-ish. Do you know the chords to it?

Yeah... I'm a total show-off. It's actually one of the most "loner" sports out there. The actual action of building muscle is spent in a gym, meticulously lifting back-breakingly heavy ...

Yeah, when they said double space, they meant double space your paragraphs. Just for the hekkuvit, I'll put in an example. I live in Idaho. It is the best state ...

Well aside from what everyone else is telling you, I kind of liked it. When I went over it the first time, I was cranky from having to meticulously edit ...

Hey good job. I could only catch one error where you switched perspectives at the beginning. “Smooth, Amanda,” I teased letting go of her. This was all I noticed. Good ...

Snoink, good luck and much...fertility...make pig babies! ...bad thoughts...bad thoughts...*PTSD*...*schizophrenia*...*dies*...

You're welcome.

This was good. I didn't like it quite as much as I did the previous entry, but it was still intriguing, and I found myself wishing for more. The grammar ...

Umm... I don't think I'll be posting chapter 2. Publishers get really testy if you've made your work publicly available. If/when my book gets published, I'll make sure to put ...

Actually, for your information, Lizard Boy was an amphibian/lizard being. He is therefore quite capable of freezing solid and then coming back to life once thawed. XD, I'm just making ...

Removed for lack of knowledge of the author.

Thanks so much for the reviews! I made too many changes when I posted it on the website- should have left it the way it was. I'll post more of ...