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Re: Concaptivus - prologue
I don't want to appear like a jerk, but it seems like this is less of a narrative and more of something you would read on the back of a ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Queue Jumper
It's a terrible thing when a young person takes their own life and does indeed "jump the queue." Although there are quite a few narratives that deal with this, I ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: The Scenario
Piss, I guess I was best off dying straight off. This kind of choose your own adventure is rare to find any more. However, it seems like your future choices ...
Jul 5, 2013 -
Re: X (Black Comedy)
Very clever. With the ending, I think it ought to be more appropriately titled as a brown comedy? I jest... The structure of this makes it much easier to read ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Butterfly Kisses
Takes me far back to ages before. It does seem as I get older that the sweet moments from my youth start to lose their color in a pallor of ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Headfirst: Chapter One
I must say that since my recent return to this site that this is one of the first things I've stumbled across that didn't give me a headache to read. ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: The Decision (Ironic Comedy)
I would like to say first of all that Dr. Strangelove is one of my most favorite films of all time and that if your username is labeled after him, ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Peep Show
I must say that after reading this I have an indelible image of Hatshepsut's beard permanently etched onto my mental corneas. There does seem to be a certain stigma against ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: e minor
Wow, Jared and Kylan... all the old people I used to talk to on here... memories... Anyways, I really liked this. As a musician, I can appreciate the thought and ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: The Suicide
This was a rather creative plot device. David Morrell wrote a novel that was more or less of the same cut. Guy want to commit suicide, gets involved in action ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
L.A. Requiem by Robert Crais: Because Joe Pike is the coolest man to ever grace the pages of a novel. Edward Cullen would crap his pants if he ran into ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: why i supported, and still do, Barack Obama
I'm pretty sure Snoink caught most of your errors, but the one that caught my eye is the $200,000 error. It started at 250,000, and it has slowly worked its ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: The Sky's on Fire
:( I feel so sorry for the poor little ebonic boy and I don't even know his name. *checks* Danny. Poor Danny. I'm certainly intrigued. I want to know what ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Clo's contest: The terrorist
I liked this work very much. It was charmingly unique. Though the basic premise was a bit of a cliche: parent checks on kid who has gotten in with the ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: -Entry deleted-
This is written fairly well. I was interested early on in the story and it was very vivid. Though the colors you draw out are primarily gray and black, it's ...
Sep 15, 2008
