scissorquiz

yeah, guys, i don't ever capitalize anything ever. this place seems to be pretty uptight about grammatical rules. thanks for the responses! when i wrote this, it was just after ...

i would recommend trying to state your feelings in a less conversational tone. most of the poem was unnecessary and redundant.

unsure to what it was REALLY about the paranoia, broken nerves, uncertainty, neuroticism, and loss of familiarity with people you know associated with a cocaine binge and the eventual owing ...

Hmm, it's nice but i think you just started inserting words just because they rhymed. nope

the blood and the pain and the pool of tears pain pain pain angst thats what i got out of this. do you listen to linkin park?

it had a kind of simplicity that makes me smile. it kept my attention and i like the way you put things. although, it seemed like you have no emotional ...

maybe next time try to rhyme with more than words that end in 'ing'?

you cram too many big words together. i felt like i was being hit when i read it. i liked the first and last stanzas, although i just wanted the ...

a cut that never heals, bleeding, pain, fading, pollution, angst angst angst. try to say something rather than stringing together pretty words. fix your grammar, too. also, why is ink ...