scintillation

Definately absurd, nonsenscial randomness (times eternity) - as Rincewind put it. When i read it through i was thinking 'what the hell is she on about?!?!?!?!' and also 'if the ...

I really like the way you've worded this, especially '...caught between limitlessness of my childhood that convinced me you could be my hero and the grown-up restrictions of seeing you ...

As Rei said, the problem with this poem is not that it is a cliche but that it feels empty. It's definately got potential for something better. Maybe if you ...

Hmm, now that could come in handy... (not just for my characters! :twisted: [j/k]) It does sound quite good. What other books are in the series?

Ok, new theory. (This is probably the opposite to what will happen, but i have to hope...) What if...(wait for it)... Dumbledore isn't dead? Maybe (as lots of people already ...

Overall, I like this. It's quite, oh how shall i put it, deep but i also think something is missing. I'm not quite sure what it is yet, though...(ponders for ...

I must say, what a brilliant idea for a poem. I like the way you start off with such a simple sentence and then go on to include alot of ...