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Let's talk about the plot first. Of course this plot has been used hundreds of times before, but if you can manage to add in your own twists and turns, ...

This was honestly very great. I like how you rhymed with the last word, and it didn't sound cheesy at all. Poems are poems--they are created from emotions and experiences, ...

Okay, so I thought this was good. Then after reading a few paragraphs, this immediately stuck out to me--the repetition of the word "I." Honestly, when you use "I" at ...

I actually quite enjoyed this since I'm really into humor and teen-fiction with a touch of romance of course. This chapter was really easy to read. There weren't really any ...

This was a really great first chapter! Though it's still kind of unclear still as to why he exactly chose to be the bully. I mean, yes, he had told ...

Hello! This was a very great first chapter. I didn't catch any grammatical mistakes, so that's pretty good. The flow and pace was very nice and smooth--it was easy to ...