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Re: The Dagger of Truth [Chapter Two]--Edited
CHAPTER TWO Karson stayed true to his promise. Five days after his arrival, Dara was working in her garden when he appeared, jumping out of the oak tree’s branches So ...
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Re: A simple Song
A simple song repeats in my head over, again, once more the right words sound as if they were wrong but sound so sweet. You repeat sound twice here. It ...
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Re: Particle of him...
Her friends told her to let him go, they told her she had a life. They told her that he didn't deserve her greatness, but she only got depressed: This ...
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Re: Paddington Bear
It was a cool Sunday morning as Paddington left the Brown’s residence for a nice relaxing stroll. Aunt Lucy had told him that exercise was a vital part in maintaining ...
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Re: Her Story
Listen, my love, I have a story to tell. One with bloodthirsty creatures from hell. With war, with famine, with destruction of peace, especially the ones that come out in ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon Knights
[s]Jing sat at the small table he used as a desk when writing his tales for the minstrels of the village[/s]. His head rested on the hardwood, making his skin ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: The Billion Dollar Murder
The Billion Dollar Murder I was drinking my morning vodka and orange juice. I used to drink coffee in the morning, but it didn’t seem to have the kick I ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Thirteen, Part B)
We do our best to make camp on the muddy, rocky ground. The grass from before, which Iarin tells me is called Shadowgrass, and grows even without sunlight, has grown ...
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Re: Carson Layne's story
“She’s dead, Clark. I accept that,” At 26, Carson Layne’s black hair had no sign of gray, but his eyes were so much older than is face. They were haunted, ...
May 17, 2008 -
Re: Why Ch. 16
"Don't touch that." The voice was so cold and metallic that it sent a shiver through Max awkward wording. Instead I recommend that you say A shiver went up Max's ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Exiles: A change of heart
There is a special kind of detachment that can only be associated with a funeral. Whether held in temple, field or out there in the wild; all funerals attract that ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 of "Thrills of Barcelona"
Velma Wilkinson dragged in the prisoner, shoving him in the chair. And it was one hell of a prisoner. Grizzled gray mane, the beginnings of a rough beard. His clothes ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: Un titled story.
[pre]Chapter 1 Every fairy tail begins with these famous words, once upon a time. These words begin great legends and happy endings. Well let me tell you this, there isn’t ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: School Trip
Here's a couple of suggestions. Since your characters seem to have lost the time machine have them try to get back to their home. Maybe they have to live in ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Reflections Chapter Three
Chapter Three Of course, it wasn’t really a body. It was only Ambrose, but he looked so much more like a cadaver when he was asleep. Without the benefit of ...
May 14, 2008
