saylyn90

The only thing that bugged me was this sentence - "It fills you to excitement to the point where you think you’re going to implode." I'd change the first 'to' ...

Gosh, this just went straight to my heart (over-emotional.) It was just very beautiful and I think everyone can rely to it - at least I did. :) Do you ...

I actually enjoyed this, I wasn't expecting it since I'm not to fond of fantasy stories that takes place in the modern world, I like it hardcore, haha :) But ...

Hmm, this is my first review and thus I just want to say: wonderful. I like the whole tone and the language. The way you've written it on is somewhat ...