sarahjane97

I liked this A LOT. For one thing, it was very refreshing. A lot of writing here is intensely descriptive and metaphor heavy, so it was nice to read something ...

Whoa. That was really, really, good!!! I was getting some serious chills up my spine... I also liked how you introduced "Beatrice" (Shana) in the prologue and brought the reader ...

Wow, this was such a creative perspective! I liked the casuality of depression, because it made it seem more like a real person than an emotion. The poem flowed really ...

I really like this poem! It is deep and touching and relatable. Also, I love your title as that's what caused me to read the poem in the first place. ...

This poem took me by surprise. When I read the title, I thought it was going to be some happy little poem about holiday cheer or something. But it wasn't ...

First off, your title is great. That's what drew me into this poem. Also, the idea was very interesting and even though it was about dying, you wrote it in ...

I really like this (I'm a sucker for rhyming poems!) I liked that the emotion was still strongly present and none of it was lost in the effort to rhyme! ...

Like the others that posted comments, I really liked the imagery but didn't quite understand the message. However, I just joined the YWS, so it could just be that I'm ...