sarahjane97

Hello Michael! Another awesome chapter! :) This was very well-written, and I'm excited to see where the story will go from here. Here are just some nit-picks I had while ...

The content of this poem was great, and there were no puncuation errors as far as I could see. However, I agree with Noelle, the breaks in the middle of ...

The effort you put into this poem totally paid off! It was beautiful, and the rhyming enhanced the poem instead of dragging it down. I envy your rhyming skills! :) ...

Your poem was very well written. Before writing this review, I actually paused to think about those who died fighting for our country. This proves that your poem has an ...

This poem shows what poetry is all about...turning something sad into something beautiful. Nice work. :) The only nitpick I have is this: On the front is her birthday Is ...

I must say I prefered the first version of your poem. I think the rhyming the second version diluted the tone and made it harder to understand. In general, the ...

Hi, I'm Sarah and I'll be reviewing your work today! I liked the general idea of this chapter a lot. However, it seemed a little rushed to me. If you ...

Nice! This poem had great rhyme and imagery, and displayed immense imagination! I have no critic for this. This poem's pace was just like a thrill ride, and made me ...

Hi Michael! Again, nice job! I really liked the emotion in this chapter, it drew me in. The dream was fantastic, I could imagine it all in my head like ...

Hey Michael! Another amazing chapter! The only real problem I had with this was the change in narration. You might want to add something at the begining of the chapter ...

Wow, this poem gave me chills! The tone was very dark and despairing, and you're rich choice of words emphasized this. I liked the ending as well; it was like ...

This is a really interesting perspective. :) However, as another reviewer already said, this should be a little more suspensful and exciting. When the girl confronted the zombie in the ...

Hey Michael!!! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this! I couldn't find your story for awhile (I've been on this site for three weeks and I still can't ...

Hey!!! I liked this a lot! You must have done a good job of balancing the mood in this song, because even though the subject matter was sad, it didn't ...

LOVED this poem!!! The subject matter was very different, which I appreciated. Also, your title was hooked me in as soon as I read it! (: Amazing job! P.S.--The twist ...