sarah01

Hi there! Sarah here for a review! So, I really liked what you did with this poem. First thing I would like to compliment you on is the title. It ...

Hi, Sarah here for a review. I really like what you wrote here but there are a couple of things that I would consider making changes to. You might want ...

Hi, Sarah for a quick review. I really enjoyed the overall style of this story. There are just a few things I would like to point out. When you said ...

Hi, Sarah for a quick review. I really enjoyed this although it was a little confused as to what the point of it. Were you referring to the point of ...

I really liked what you did in this piece. This imagery and description is great. I loved the lines "flowing rivers and fresh air cold nights and smoky fires hissed ...

What first came to mind when reading this was the feeling of realizing the small role you play in the world. How every individual has a unique story that can't ...

Whoa there!! This was amazing!! I love the use of description and details you inserted into this poem. I felt like I really connected with it because of the amount ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was captivating reading the letter and picturing the relationship between the characters. I was touched by how the letter was so open and truthful ...

This is by far on of the most emotional works I have read in a long time. I love the connection between reality and the story. It seemed like I ...

I love what you did in this piece. The way that she still loves him even though he left her in some way. The prospect of hope in the story ...