sara13

Hey this is well written and made my heart pound a little faster...but not to much. One line I felt should be changed was you wrote "the tears you are ...

hey Lena... wow i just looked at my reading again and realized my dumb mistakes. I was laughing at myself so hard! Thanks for fixing my problems I'll get to ...

thanks and the beginning sentence was just a comment before I actually started writing. And yeah those silly spelling mistakes make me go INSANE :) Thanks allot I appreciate the ...

thanks for the feedback guys I really need it :D

I liked it. But sometimes I think you're mind would wonder or something and it stopped the reader from feeling. But over all good job:)

I never saw the spelling check. Hey your the best! Now that is what I call criticism! I am totally gonna take that with me to my next stories. And ...

hey thanks guys. It's just those silly spelling mistakes and when I get really exited while writing I tend to rush things but If i fix those I think I ...

thanks and can I ask how you can put a picture as you're avatar?

hey thanks and i type really fast so i make allot of mistaks and as I said before. Not really good at the sad stuff. But thaks for the help ...