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Re: The Strongest She Can Be
wow! i love it. i really can't suggest much else!
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Re: More than just a teacher
I like the idea but when you use end rhyme every two lines the lines the lines should be longer. Either that or you should try to do a rhyme ...
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Re: Sorry, Songbird
This is absolutely beautiful! Please keep writing, I counted no flaws except the advise that, don't sacrifice expressing yourself for a rhyme.
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Re: I Tread On Dangerous Ground
This is beautiful! Careful not to rhyme at the expense of expressing the way you truly feel.
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Re: Annoying
I like it! my poems dont rhyme! haha
Apr 13, 2011