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Loved it. The whole idea of how the prince came into the story is really good. I think the build up was good and even how knowing Snow allowed him ...

Well this is strange. Definitely a difference. It was really good. I got a bit lost half way through, but I liked how you took it all from a different ...

An interesting story. Catches the attention. The ending was good. It really leaves you wondering what is wrong with him. Is he deformed or even human? Really good ideas. Love ...

Nice. Great beginning. It catches the attention instantly and doesn't let go. I love the way you end it as well. A complete stranger saving the day. Hopefully anyway. You ...

Wow. Powerful piece. Really liked the depth and mystery to the story. It truly shows that nothing will stop a mother from protecting her children. Look forward to how the ...

An unusual story but I liked it. Had a very interesting ending. Looks like it could be really good

Strange. Unusual. Interesting. This has the attention from the start. The way you go from hiding something to on about a dictator. love it.

OOOOhhhhh ok that was creepy. I could just sense that something wrong was going to happen when she gets a night of peace. Brilliant story. Can't wait to read whats ...

Really good. The whole piece. You make Dylan seem really wierd, even unworldly. Great story. Really nice that Finn might find a friend with her as well.

ok the humour in this is good. I loved it

I liked it. The whole cowering under him like that and taking it for only so long. I would have flipped to. Good for her to finally stand up to ...

Oh very nice. I loved the way you portrayed it as a mother and daughter that are like two complete strangers. The ending was brilliant.

not bad. I was suspicious of her being the daughter. Real laugh. I think the best bit was the sigh of relief turning into a whimper when he finds himself ...

sweet. A gripping story. The whole thing kept me reading. The ending was very brutal but ok not bad. But what happens to Ethaniel? How does he react to Whithers ...

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