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Re: When I am all alone.
It's really good poem but you need to be more descriptive. But I'm struggling with the same thing called "painting a picture'. You have to use adjectives to describe the ...
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: Misery Lane
"As we walked on the beach, Hand in hand. Our eyes would reach, Toes wiggled in sand." I liked this part ^-^ It was so cute! Anyways, I was quite ...
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: Unobserved
"I cower in the corner, unobserved. Just a figment of your imagination, Until you bring me to life." This is the first thing that caught my eye. You really expressed ...
Aug 9, 2008
