salutations

Aha, it seems I too, have fallen in love with your poem! My heart constricts here, I taste salt: primordial, raw, and teeming, and I understand what it means to ...

I'm relatively unpracticed at critical analysis, so bear with me. I like your poem, but parts of it are a bit confusing. Here, to start, grammatical suggestions. You live in ...

To start, this is a lovely poem. The descriptions are simple and clean, leaving the poem light, but emotionally charged. That being said, there are a few grammatical errors, here ...