salmintea

Thank you so much! Yeah, the next few chapters I have prepared were fairly rushed and don't have a lot of description, but I thought I would post them on ...

@Cloudkid @Shikora

I would love to tag you! Thank you so much for the review! - B

Thanks! I was a little worried writing it in his head, though I think it will work out alright... I hope (aha).

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, and I have been very icky when it comes to writing detail lately. I do have four more chapters written, ...

Hey hiraeth! I'd like to say that I love that last paradoxical sentence, "and i surrender / to the Freedom." I also find it interesting that in that line "i" ...

Thanks! Yeah, with the whole emotion thing, he finds it hard to express or challenging to have true emotions. So, when he said he was "preparing [himself] for the mourning ...

Ooh. Well, the poem/narrative represents the message very well.

Thank you for your feedback! I know sometimes I can word things weird, so it's good that you commented on that sentence. Also, now that I think about it, yes ...

Darn... haha. Yeah there's always some sort of distraction, right?

Okay, haha. Well, that's good I guess. I just haven't found a lot of time for writing lately. But, I'm planning to make time! Just gotta cut down on the ...

Thanks! Also, sorry that it's been so long since I've uploaded. I'll try to get chapter three up by the end of the week!

Thank you so much! Wow! And yes, I feel that my chapters are quite short as well. In reality, I'd probably combine chapters one and two. For purposes of reviewing ...

Thank you so much! Awe, I feel so proud. I'm very happy to have you as a dedicated reader. It's fairly refreshing actually. I might post edited versions of chapters, ...

Ooh, it looks really cool. Is there a syllable scheme at all? (Just in case, I might take you up on that challenge ;) )