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Re: Lessons from a gigantic creature. (Intended for Slam-y poem)
I'm personally a huge fan of slam poetry, so the fact that you uploaded one here is already quite awesome. I like the adolescent aspect of this poem, and depending ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: The Mean Spirited Leper Gives Me a Green Leather Jacket
At first I was admittedly kind of lost, but boy am I glad I kept reading. The message about society and its imperfections of perceived freedom and communism and free ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Under the Lemon Tree
Hey! Sahib the Scribe here and I just wanted to give you some feedback to append what Alice here said. I too am missing the point a little bit. It ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: in an overheated room
Hi! Sahib the Scribe here and I just want to say a few things about your poem. First of all, I truly love the vulnerability theme to the poem because ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: A Dance With My Pen
As an individual who personally LOVES his fountain pens, I can really relate to what you're saying. However, at times I think the approach you take is almost too abstract ...
Jul 14, 2016
