rustystar

the chatroom idea is good, you should totally try it! i liked how you did the online thing in the first place. i think the beginning was my favorite part. ...

nice flip! i really liked the part about tasting like twizzlers. it seemed funny, a relief from the seriousness of the moment. i don't get the end, but then again ...

it was short, but amazing- really. i liked how you said so much in the paragraph right after he tells her he loves her. your descriptions are nicely detailed. i ...

you didn't give anyone a name, so that part was hard to follow since you had to keep describing the twins. but i too looove the Grimm Brothers, and i ...