rustystar

i am so so so glad you revised it, it seems so less cluttered now. you're imagery is great, and over-all you did well in keeping it Christian-y, or whatever ...

poems like this are good. i think anything that's written has a purpose for some reason, same goes for this. it is a cute little piece. famous authors write stuff ...

ah! oh my goodness gracious! i LOVE this. fantastic! yes, i think he very much acts like it, though maybe you could add something about Rumpelstilskin's explanation for him living ...

i love remakes of classic fairy tales like this! im not much of a critiquer, but i noticed a few things. first, i've recently read and been told (after i ...

i only didnt understand this sentence: Ha, it seems to be saying. He’ll sit next to me, but he’ll never next to you. (im an idiot and dont know how ...

the way you describe the snowfall is wonderful- there's just no form to it. i dont mind no punctuation, but capital letters at the start of each new line would ...

your descriptions are really well written, and since i don't mind free-verse i actually liked the way this flows without rhyming. i love reading poems with good imagery and diction, ...