runawaylove

Right about the 'glasses' thing. I agree with you that it would be better if I wrote 'glass' but 'glasses' goes perfectly with the rhyme scheme so I just did ...

'Wretch' is a word and it means an unfortunate or unhappy person. Maybe it stands out but I'll like to keep it. :) Writing poems are really simple. (for me ...

Made all the changes. Thank you again for helping me make my poem better!

Actually I had put those commas but I did not save the work. And Thank you! :D

"I spend all my time trying to forget him I now understand how love changes in a whim." These lines show that my memories kept coming back :)

I always find it difficult to talk about real events in poetry. I can convey what I felt but I just can not describe a specific moment.

Thanks :)

I'm not understanding how I can put MY experience. It'll be helpful if you could elaborate more :)

Thank you :D And that last line is my favourite as well.

Thank you for pointing that out. I fixed it.

Thank you for your review. Its really great how you pointed out my mistakes and I will surely work on them.

"Listen to my heartbeat You'll never understand I am standing on my feet In a far away land" These were my favourite lines because I think they are the heart ...