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This. This is good. Instantly I really felt part of Arwyns story, and connected with her as a character. Your word choice is amazing, and really really effective. Amazing job. ...

Hi! Thank you so much! :)

Thanks for pointing everything out! Although, two little things... 'gosh' -in my Catholic opinion- is not taking Gods name in vain. In this context it's a substitute for using God, ...

You're welcome! :)

Haha thank you so much! It's my nanowrimo story this year so I've been terribly forgetful about everything except words (sorry) I like that you think she's old! I think ...

Aw! That's so sweet! Thank you! :D

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! It means a lot! :DDDD

Aw :') thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for pointing my wee mistakes out too! I'm terrible for not noticing xD

Aw thank you! It's sort of based on past experiences, so maybe that came through more clearly than I meant haha XD

Aw I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much! :D

Aw thank you! :)

Aha thank you! :)

@Noelle they were just best friends btw :)

Hey! thank you :) this helps a lot

Thanks! :D