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Great, thanks! :)

Thanks again! Dialogue isn't a strength of mine, as you saw but I'm trying to work on it. :P I totally need to transition better from that Jackson part. *cringe*

Thanks for the review! Yikes, I didn't intend for Maddie to come across as shy, just... not exactly the friendliest creature on the planet... :0 I'm also glad you said ...

Thanks for the review! :) Okay, so, to be completely honest with you... I did not have an exact goal in mind when I started writing this. One day I ...

She's always fascinated me for some odd reason. Thanks! :)

She's always fascinated me for some odd reason. Thanks! :)

(I always have such trouble coming up with what to call a character's parents. dunno why) SAME DUDE :)

Well, in the second draft I'm sure you can work out those kinks because I think so far this chapter exemplifies their great relationship really well. There's just some parts ...

Oh, it's fine. I mean, I didn't find it unhelpful or anything like that. xD

Thanks once more! Sure, you're free to point out grammatical mistakes and such. I made an author's note on that in the first chapter half because I didn't want a ...

Thanks for the reviews! :)

You learn something new everyday. ;) I probably should have warned that poetry is not my strong suit.

Kerfuffle is such a beautiful word. Why have I never heard of it before?? Hmm, okay. I'm beginning to understand your dilemma. I would suggest you maybe check out how ...

Will do! :)

That's fine. And a different perspective will help.