rosereader6

This is a very well done dramatic piece. I think you created a place that many people could imagine pretty easily. I was slightly confused by when you started it ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. I thought it was very unique how you broke up sentences into a few lines, and then had it rhyme. It was interesting to ...

Elfin12, This piece is really suspenseful and descriptive. I think you did a fantastic job describing all that you wanted to. I especially liked how you described your character as ...