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Re: Wonderland
greetings, your writing is a bit chaotic. Your writing also have phrases that aren't really needed. For example. "its a little, not a lot weirder," you didn't have to put ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Silence is the Voice of Thinkers
omg, yesssssss. This speaks for literally everyone who doesn't say a single thing (like me) but on the inside has a world of ideas and creativity. This piece here you ...
Sep 9, 2016 -
Re: Home Isn't With Him
i love this poem, its like all my feelings written into one. I can totally relate to this poem and i made an emotional connection with this poem. BRAVO! to ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: I Miss You
this is a great story, i think you should expand your stanzas a little more, but I see where you said you did it in 5 minutes. also, in the ...
Feb 4, 2016