rollingstones

greetings, your writing is a bit chaotic. Your writing also have phrases that aren't really needed. For example. "its a little, not a lot weirder," you didn't have to put ...

omg, yesssssss. This speaks for literally everyone who doesn't say a single thing (like me) but on the inside has a world of ideas and creativity. This piece here you ...

i love this poem, its like all my feelings written into one. I can totally relate to this poem and i made an emotional connection with this poem. BRAVO! to ...

this is a great story, i think you should expand your stanzas a little more, but I see where you said you did it in 5 minutes. also, in the ...