roeckercody

This is good. And cute. Not at all what I was expecting and I was hooked immediately. This was different and hust great! The story is very interesting and takes ...

This gives me a lot to think about. I enjoyed this. It is beautifully written and I think it is very good in all that it is. This is not ...

Despite the few spelling mistakes and funky structuring of a few of the sentences, this is a literary masterpiece. Every single thing about this story screams classic. Folk/fairy tale as ...

Honestly speaking, I am confused as to the purpose of this piece. What am I supposed to be feeling? How is this person feeling? I am sort of getting how ...

Oh woah. This is beautiful. I love the story. So many songs don't have this storyline anymore and I really appreciate what you have done with this. The story is ...

This is simple and good. There are a few spelling mistakes and such. There are moments where you used the wrong "there" or "your". That is easily fixed with editing. ...

This is fantastic. I love that it is written in story format, because it flows really well that way. I admire that way of writing because with poetry, it is ...

I laughed. This is funny. I love when people make fun of writing things that frustrate them. Poetry can sometimes be the perfect vessel to express frustrations. I think you ...

This was so painful to read. In the best possible way. It hurt so bad because everything was so real. I felt every emotion so vividly. This is such a ...

Woah. This is an interesting concept and I really appreciate what you have done with this. I would definitely read more for sure. There are a few moments where you ...

I loved this! The whole concept is very interesting and I was immediately drawn into the story. I already feel for the characters. I would love to know more. Would ...

I like this. Especially with the addition of another language. That makes it more intriguing. I appreciate the key at the bottom so we can all understand it, and I ...

I think this is my favorite thing I have read in a very long time, and especially since joining Young Writer's Society. I adore this story. The pain the character ...

Part of me, having never read this before, had a deep worry that something terrible was going to happen to Thomas and that it would make me upset. I am ...

Thank you for this beautiful piece. I admire the formatting for the piece because I think it is simply elegant. I like what this has to offer. I get the ...