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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Place of stillness

    I really like the mood of this piece. Your images really give off that feeling of a frozen scene, especially the mention of the robin with its wings outspread. However, ...

    Jul 20, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: idk

    So true, my friend, so true. I really think this poem exposes a wrong that seems to be wide spread in today's culture. I love the way the punctuation and ...

    Jul 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Miss The Rain

    This was such a beautiful poem. For someone going through a period of change and having to give up things that have been taken for granted, this really hits hard. ...

    Jul 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Slenderman

    I really like the flow of this piece. It has a nice beat, reminiscent of one of those old children's rhymes about boogeymen and monsters. The second line was a ...

    Jul 20, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Competition piece....

    Wow, this is a very powerful piece. Not only does it cover a very pungent part of history, but it also tells two different points of view of war. That, ...

    Jul 20, 2012


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