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Re: Infinite Oblivion: Chapter 1
Hello! I thought I'd just pop in here for a quick review. There are lots of others who have already covered the stuff that I noticed, so it would be ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Untitled- Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey, BlockedWriter. You should definitely continue with this. I like where it's going, and you shouldn't be so quick to give up. So, again, definitely continue. I do, however, have ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Try again - Chapter one: Normal day
Naveshock! Rocketdog11 for a review here. Can I say first that I like where this is going? You set up your main characters really well and I like that. I ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: The Hybrids (Chapter 9)
Hello, jls1638...rocketdog11 here for my first review. I'm not much of a veteran to this site at least, but yeah. Anyway, I just want to say first that your story ...
Jun 1, 2014