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cool. looking forward to the next chapters :D

Ah yes, rough drafts are wonderful that way. The thing I like to remember about rough drafts is that it's just getting your thoughts out of your head and on ...

Yeah it was kinda a memory- flashback thing. I guess.

Thanks bro. Perhaps, as my plan to leave out some details from the start to make the reader more interested, I have left out too much information? *sigh* another writing ...

Thanks! So, describing the setting and stuff more? I have put a lot of thought into the characters, but I haven't thought about the setting as much. Thanks for that ...

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so you're planning on watching it

It's perfect. I got nothing for ya.

wait.... yet?!

cool. I suggest doing at least some foreshadowing about drie then :)

ok, cool. good luck with the next chapters :)

Thanks for reviewing! To your comments: I meant "whole body"- whoops Griffith is his name, but Griffin is kinda like a nickname of sorts... Thanks for mentioning that stuff... I ...

My thoughts exactly on the title :) I agree that The Orphan is boring, and it causes the reader to expect the story to be about some poor kid in ...

I play clarinet... it was my first year in marching band (go freshmen, i guess) and it was a really good season for us. no need to thank me- I've ...

cool! I shall read it.