rishabh

it is a good poem but not sweet. i am not satisfied with the title of ur poem. u have mentioned "death" everywhere, which took ur poem on it's side ...

this poem is short but not sweet. ur first line left a very bad impression. revise ur work and re-submit it. ur vocab part is nice in this poem. but ...

in one line----" this is an excellent work." i loved the way in which you have framed everything. from top to bottom this poem exceptionally awesome. now here's ur poem's ...

this poem is nicely written but at last it left a very bad impression of 'incompleteness'. end this poem with more creativity and imagination. a good poetry means 'you are ...

there is huge error in ur starting line. find out n correct it. spelling of vegetables is wrong. it is vegetables nt vegatebles. ur work is nicely constructed but ur ...

spelling of doctor is wrong. it is D-O-C-T-O-R NOT DACTOR. spelling of inappropriately is wrong. it is a-p-p-r-o-p-r-i-a-t-e-l-y not innapropritly. this is very badly constructed story. work hard on u

it's nice work but very old school and immature. tell me one thing that this is 21st century and who read this kinda stories. change ur writing style li'l bit ...

the reality is that i don't like sci-fi writings but ur writing has touched my heart. u hv made my mind to chose ur stuff! its ausum, i like to ...

[By God, what was that thing? The demented figure of some humanoid blinked into Castle’s view, somewhere along the cobblestone sea. It was tall, leering, and had hideously long arms. ...

from the begining i wanted some work which i feel from my heart and ur work is like this only. i like ur work. [Whatever, let me say that I ...

[The guy she was talking with was laughing too. He was, for lack of a better word, intimidating. I couldn’t place why, but he was muscular. Not huge, but athletic. ...

i am totally agree wid sapi.........ur work iz ausum......i like ur work. i am a professional writer. and ur work is also the same type. good work pal. seriously man! ...

this peice of work is not that good, but it is not also bad stuff. i want to give u one advice that plz write ur stuff in good language. ...

this peice of work is nyc.......i appreciate ur writing. ur work is good. i hope i will read ur work further. ["We're going to the mental hospital right now. Officer ...

this is prolougue is awesome i wish to read some more part of ur book. this is suspense i guess if not then wt is it? but overall good. your ...