retrodisco666

Thanks for the review, my only point back would be pins are pink haha

Not a fan I take it?

An extension of a common interpretation on the classic tale of Peter Pan haha

Haha it is a common interpretation of the piece as it is xD

Hey :) this isn't a stab at Disney, I wasn't thinking of them :) I was just taking a different take on a tale. But yeah this one had nothing ...

But isn't the point of Peter Pan thy very one has to grow up some time...beside the point haha shame you don't like it :) I love taking things and ...

Haha tinkerbell I made into a drug :) I take it you're not a fan ;)

Oh god I'm sorry for not noticing!

Hey thanks for the review :) in terms Of format I think that's just my general style of writing for Poetry. I like cesauras and enjambement so I just use ...

Hey thanks for the comment. The uneven stanzas are just my style of writing haha :) as for this well I had to choose something historical for the games and ...

Hey thanks for the comment. The uneven stanzas are just my style of writing haha :) as for this well I had to choose something historical for the games and ...

Hey thanks for the comment. The uneven stanzas are just my style of writing haha :) as for this well I had to choose something historical for the games and ...

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Hey! Retro here to review! First I shall do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) 'She likes to rape love of the young' I don't like ...

Hey thanks for the comment! Just a few things I'd like to say :) In terms of employment I didn't get a job in Disneyland because of my sexuality, so ...

That was fair and balanced :) I'm just going to say that you said Disney doesn't have to do anything to represent, which is a perfectly balanced argument, but it ...