retrodisco666

Hey, I think I know the competition you're on about. Mine is also getting published. If I get invited to the reading of them, I know I will not win ...

Hey, A dark poem. I liked it. I understood it all. It was effective. Well done. ~Retro Disco

Hey, The main character in the piece has XP which means he is allergic to sunlight. Hope this helps. ~Retro Disco666

Thank you for all the comments. They are really appreciated.

Hey, For a lovey dovey piece this is really good. I had a tune playing in my head whilst reading this so the lyrics aspect really works. All my nit ...

Again I have to point out, that this poem is genius. Well done. ~Retro Disco666

Hello :) I'm back. spoke it up I know what you're trying to say, but this doesn't make sense. They're others like this in the piece, but nothing to major. ...

Yes it will work without a prologue,don't worry ~Retro Disco666

It just doesn't seem very prologue like, I just think it suits better as a chapter 1 personally. ~Retro Disco666

Hi, I liked it. Just as good as the first chapter. I can't wait to read the rest, and I really hope you liked it. No nit picks. PM for ...

This poem is getting published

I think this could be one of the best I have ever wrote.

Whoa. This is the first time I have been on here in a few days, so I would like to say thank you to everyone for their comments. Thanks. It ...

Thank you. I have changed it to a better age I think. I'm thrilled you like it. Thank you. ~Retro Disco666

Thank you so much for the review.