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Re: when i ate the mold - IV (or, the rabbit)
I know I rarely review your works because you show me privately, but I had to review this. There's so much creepy, strong imagery in here, painting this story of ...
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Re: The monster within | Chapter Ten |
i enjoyed this short chapter. I think it's a nice, brief conversation that sets up a lot of questions for the future of these characters, I like the inner monologue ...
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Re: I'm Sorry
a beautiful poem, and as 4revgreen said, I too can feel the emotion radiating from this poem. I enjoyed that you included the parts in parentheses, which you said were ...
Feb 21, 2025 -
Re: A day in the life of an ordinary chick
I have to say that stumbling across your artwork was an unexpectedly delightful experience. Initially, based on the title, I was anticipating reading a short story or a poem. However, ...
Feb 11, 2023 -
Re: Toska
Your poem 'Toska' is a poignant, raw and emotional expression of heartbreak and encapsulates the feeling of being in love with someone who is not reciprocating the feelings. I found ...
Feb 10, 2023 -
Re: Wetfire-Chapter Four
This was an exciting read. I have not read the other parts, I confess, but I will try my best to get round to reading them all at some point. ...
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Re: Zuzu the clown’s origin story
This story is interesting but it is written in an abrupt, short way. All of your paragraphs seem to be only a few sentences in length, some just being one ...
Feb 10, 2023 -
Re: Ghost House:Part Two
I liked this story, it was intriguing and had many elements of surprise along the way. The chapters were all quite short but I think that does work in making ...
Feb 10, 2023
