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Re: Remember She Once was Innocent
I like it, but the flow isnt very good, i agree with the person above me, it is awkward in places but i like it(:
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: You.
this is soooooooooo sweet, someones awfully lucky and whoever you wrote it for you must love them alot(: i loooove it
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: crying on the cross
Thank you, and yeah I'm not the best speller(: haha, but I'm glad you were moved and that you both loved the poem. It means alot to me. Thank you ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Pain Is The Only Thing She Swallows.
I relate to this poem. I softend when I read it.... It's good.
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Wow. Your really good. This is just... fantastic:D! Why have you guys grown apart? Hah! Shoooot! This could be a durnnn story!
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Rain
This poem is really .. beautiful. It seems like you find comfort and serenity in the rain. I like that. The rain restores and renews things.
Nov 3, 2010