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Raabia Tabassum

  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: The Story Of An England Pencil

    Sometimes will typing i do spelling mistakes but yeah thanks for your review. Will Do much better.

    May 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: removed.

    Woah.. Amazing.... I really liked the way you wrote it. Maybe you need a slight improvement in grammar and you can do it. I Really appreciate it. Its simple wowie! ...

    May 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Twisted: Prologue

    Its twisted i must say. This looks more like your thoughts instead of a story. This story is short but i think it needs alot of improvement. With a little ...

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: The Story Of An England Pencil

    Thanks

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sunset

    I Like The Way You've Described How A Sun Actually Sets. Writing A Poem Really Requires A Talent And You Have Shown It In This Poem. The Co lours you ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Romantic Re: Hollow

    Keep Going

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sunset

    Keep Going! :D

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: The Story Of An England Pencil

    Thank You :).. Yeah I Will Take Care Of That.

    May 27, 2013


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality